Day Twenty-Nine
Seems like you were always leaving
Or left. Leaving with
Your roaring engine voice.Left in the split
Of your fire-cracked glacier voice.Fleeing the Texan woman's life
At your throat.Left-field, gone big in The CitySinging in colours the let me bePurple plea of the wounded.Seducer of tied-off fusesWith no match left unlitBy your spilt whiskey voice.Leaving behind the foreboding,Real-known moment,Of needing to swim in gasolineWhen you couldn't quit lighting matches.Left lonely by lovers, withOnly what was left in the wakeOf your Russian roulette voice;Your Pollock-paint lifeOf daring too muchTo be too different.Leaving us at twenty-sevenWith only your brass rocket voice.
I'm so excited you got featured for this!! I was so impressed with it when I read it. On a second read it's even better. "Seducer of tied-off fuses" is phenomenal.
ReplyDeleteAh! Thanks so much. That line went through so many iterations and in the end it was a bit of a dice roll. Writing poems is wild ^^
DeleteI expected and hoped this one would be the feature. So good!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Rosemary. I've very much enjoyed reading your poems and your ever-generous comments this April.
DeleteStunning poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kim!
DeleteOh, just beautiful, the brilliance of 'fire cracked glacier voice"
ReplyDeleteThank you very much
DeleteThis is just such a wonderfully evocative telling of the most obvious admiration of an artist. Brilliant work
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting, Graham.
Deletewell done. Good poem!
ReplyDeleteCheers!
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