Tuesday, 29 April 2025

Janis Joplin as a Fish Swimming in Gasoline

 

Day Twenty-Nine



Seems like you were always leaving
Or left. Leaving with 
Your roaring engine voice.
Left in the split
Of your fire-cracked glacier voice.
Fleeing the Texan woman's life 
At your throat.
Left-field, gone big in The City
Singing in colours the let me be
Purple plea of the wounded.
Seducer of tied-off fuses
With no match left unlit
By your spilt whiskey voice. 
Leaving behind the foreboding, 
Real-known moment,
Of needing to swim in gasoline
When you couldn't quit lighting matches. 
Left lonely by lovers, with
Only what was left in the wake
Of your Russian roulette voice;
Your Pollock-paint life
Of daring too much
To be too different.
Leaving us at twenty-seven
With only your brass rocket voice.







12 comments:

  1. I'm so excited you got featured for this!! I was so impressed with it when I read it. On a second read it's even better. "Seducer of tied-off fuses" is phenomenal.

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    1. Ah! Thanks so much. That line went through so many iterations and in the end it was a bit of a dice roll. Writing poems is wild ^^

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  2. I expected and hoped this one would be the feature. So good!

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    1. Many thanks, Rosemary. I've very much enjoyed reading your poems and your ever-generous comments this April.

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  3. Oh, just beautiful, the brilliance of 'fire cracked glacier voice"

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  4. This is just such a wonderfully evocative telling of the most obvious admiration of an artist. Brilliant work

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  5. well done. Good poem!

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